Documentary
U.S. Navy
"I am an American Sailor"
WRITING SAMPLE
As part of their training, the NAVY wanted its recruits to have a historical overview of the U.S. Sailor. So how do you compress over 200 years of history into a ½ hour show? The approach we took was to create a series of fictional sailors - from different time periods - who reflect on their time in the service.

Below are the first few pages of this 30 minute piece: If you'd like a copy of the complete script and/or video, let us know via our Contact page.




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OPEN WITH A CLOSE UP SHOT OF OCEAN ROLLING BY THE CAMERA (AS IF YOU WERE STANDING ON THE BOW OF A DECK LOOKING DOWN AT THE WATER ROLLING PAST YOUR SHIP.) OVER THIS, SUPER THE TITLE: I AM AN AMERICAN SAILOR:
A HISTORY OF THE U.S. NAVY ENLISTED
SOUND: SFX of ocean waves; start mid- tempo music.
CONTINUE THE ABOVE SHOT. LOSE TITLE AND REPLACE IT WITH A NEW GRAPHIC ON THE LOWER LEFT SCREEN: A NAVY BORN: 1775 - 1812. DISSOLVE OFF THE GRAPHIC, STILL CONTINUING THE OCEAN FOOTAGE, AS THE NARRATION BEGINS. SOUND: Begin to fade out music.
HAMILTON: My name is William Hamilton. When I was a boy of 17, I was a sailor in the United States Navy proudly serving aboard the Bonhomme Richard, commanded by Captain John Paul Jones. My enlistment was for only one year, but it was a year to last me a lifetime.
MONTAGE OF VARIOUS PAINTINGS DEPICTING THE BATTLE OF THE BON HOMME RICHARD VS. SERAPIS. In September of 1780, we were off the coast of England, in pursuit of a British merchant convoy and all that stood in our way was their escort vessel, Serapis. We managed to come alongside their frigate by a bit of trickery for we flew the British ensign. It was only when we were within pistol range that the Captain ordered me to replace the flag with our own red, white and blue stripes.

That was the beginning of one of history's bitterest ship-to-ship battles. For 3 ½ hours, carnage reigned on both ships and crews as our 9 pounders wreaked havoc on Serapis' upper deck, while her 12 pounders slowly destroyed our below decks. In the end, Serapis surrendered, but at what a cost: over 150 of our crew lay dead or wounded on a man-of-war that would never recover from her blows. The day after the battle we transferred our wounded and our flag to Serapis and promptly renamed her the Sea Raper. It was from her deck the next morning that we all watched as the Bonhomme Richard at last sank into the sea.
MONTAGE OF THE FOLLOWING:

  • PAINTING OF TYPICAL SEAMAN, 1797
  • CONSTELLATION IN MED. SEAS, 1804
  • PAGE FROM THE CONT.CONGRESS AUTHORIZING NAVY
  • FIRST NAVY SEAL, 1780
  • CONTINENTAL NAVY WARRANT CERTIFICATE, 1775
  • CONSTITUTION ARTICLE APPROPRIATING NAVY, 1793
  • PAINTING OF THE CHESAPEAKE CONTINENTAL NAVY CUTTER TIED UP TO DOCK, 1777
  • RECRUITING POSTER, 1777
  • TWO SAILORS IN A SALOON, 1778
It was only five years prior to this battle that our young country even had a Navy. The Continental Congress set up the Marine Committee in 1775 with instructions to recruit men for ships of the Continental Navy. In point of fact, most recruitment was done by each ship's captain, usually in seaport taverns, where young lads, addled by drink, would hear tall tales of adventures to come and be promised a handsome salary of $8 a month. Still, creating a Navy and maintaining it were two different matters. Even though the United States Constitution was ratified in 1788, mandating that Congress provide and maintain a Navy, it wasn't until 1794 that Congress could raise sufficient monies for the construction of six frigates. And money too was the reason our enlistment lasted only one year, for Congress feared the expense of a large standing Navy.
MONTAGE OF FOLLOWING:
  • AMERICAN BOATS ATTACKING TRIPOLI VESSELS, 1804
  • CONSTELLATION DESTROYING TRIPOLI GUNBOATS, 1804
  • INTREPID BLOWS UP TRIPOLI HARBOR
  • ENTERPRISE VS. A TRIPOLI SHIP
  • COMBAT BETWEEN AMERICAN SAILORS AND ARABS IN TRIPOLI
  • BATTLE OF TRIPOLI
  • CONSTITUTION BOMBARDING TRIPOLI
  • SAILORS ON GUNBOAT IN TRIPOLI
  • SAILORS FIGHTING ON SHIP DECATUR
That attitude, however, quickly changed during war time conditions. During the Barbary wars, President Jefferson sent a squadron to the Mediterranean to fight the pirates who were commandeering our merchant ships. But the recurring need to send each Navy ship home every year to discharge its sailors burdened the operation for four years. As a result, Congress authorized two-year enlistments in 1803.
MONTAGE OF THE FOLLOWING:
  • HOISTING THE STARS AND STRIPES
  • SURRENDER AT YORKTOWN, 1789
  • SAILORS CHEERING FROM DECK OF CONSTITUTION
  • HOISTING FLAG ABOARD USS RALEIGH
  • ENGAGEMENT BETWEEN LEXINGTON & ALERT, 1777
  • BRITISH AND AMERICAN VESSELS IN ACTION, 1777
  • DEFENSE CAPTURING CYRUS, 1777
Often I reflect on our war for independence, and what my comrades at sea accomplished. Our Continental Navy did not exceed at any time more than 3,000 seamen and marines. The British Navy, by contrast, counted 110,000 seamen and marines by war's close. And yet we successfully protected the merchant ships carrying to us the most precious of all cargo: gunpowder. For without it, our revolution would surely have been lost. It is for that reason, above all others, I say to you: I am proud to be an American Sailor.
FADE TO BLACK. DISSOLVE UP TO SHOW OCEAN WAVES ROLLING BY CAMERA. BRING IN GRAPHIC ON THE LOWER LEFT SCREEN: WOODEN SHIPS AND IRON MEN: 1812-1865 ASHWOOD: It was the war of 1812 that brought the United States Navy into great public favor, for more victories were won at sea than on land in this campaign.
SHOW MONTAGE OF PAINTINGS DEPICTING THE BATTLE BETWEEN THE CONSTITUTION AND THE GUERRIERE. I know of this first hand for I was an American sailor serving on board the USS Constitution. My name is Brian Ashwood, and that summer we engaged in battle against the British frigate Guerriere off the coast of Boston. It was the first time an American frigate had fought another, and a short fight it was: in 30 minutes we had demasted the enemy, forcing her surrender, with barely any damage to the Constitution - a vessel that would later nicknamed Old Ironsides.


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